Fix/rate my dark deck?

um u gotta check da new rules man like dmoc is banned and so is disk commander n u dont need mask of darkness waste of a monster....there are better dark monsters like if ur gonna use lot of destiny monsters, get d draw too to get ur dark monsters easier oh wait nvm i forgot that last sentece haha mybad n um no lightning vortex? n yugioh is funo ok? dont listen to losers who make fun of yugioh cuz they have never played before soo umm yeah haha i never seen anybody use vorse raider in forever aha but i think its good umm 8/10 well idk how fast it is rite now but it looks good ahha